Saturday, June 28, 2008

doorway

somehow love gets past
the barricading doorways
like an SMS!
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every doorway locked
the fragrance, a prisoner
elopes with the wind!
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did slam the door shut
yet i fail to keep you out
dreams dictate the script!
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an easy way in
but once inside the puzzle
the way out is not!
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will such seeds to sprout
and send the blossoms anew
through the earth's doorways!
../original/z.g.
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14 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonJune 29, 2008 at 1:30 AM

    I sure did enjoy that one. Love seems to seek its own despite efforts to wall it out. The imagery is beautiful.

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  2. Gemma WisemanJune 29, 2008 at 1:36 AM

    "Dreams dictate the script" is a powerful line! Great!

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  3. BarbJune 29, 2008 at 2:19 AM

    We all seem to put up barricades, even from love. Wonderful!

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  4. AnonymousJune 29, 2008 at 3:38 AM

    Great job!!! I love it!

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  5. me ann my cameraJune 29, 2008 at 4:15 AM

    I too love the line, ".. dreams dictate the script." Emotions are so difficult to erase even when we think we have closed out mind.

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  6. PamJune 29, 2008 at 4:41 AM

    I like that your lines and words made me feel like I was in a maze trying to find a way around the barricades.

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  7. Edward S GaultJune 29, 2008 at 10:08 PM

    I enjoy having my dreams inform me.
    I don't know if I always want to follow their script though.
    Thank You for a great poem.

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  8. TeriJune 30, 2008 at 9:56 AM

    Your words have a life of their own-so beautifully said.

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  9. Tumblewords:June 30, 2008 at 10:25 AM

    an easy way...way out is not
    Delightful and provocative phrasing!

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  10. Kathie BrownJune 30, 2008 at 4:12 PM

    I hate being caught in a dream that dictates the script! What a wild ride through an ominous door!

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  11. indicaspeciesJuly 1, 2008 at 6:09 AM

    This is a wonderful doorway.

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  12. RavenJuly 1, 2008 at 9:49 PM

    These are all wonderful. I think the first and third are my favorites. Such a rich, delightful variety.

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  13. little wing writerJuly 2, 2008 at 12:26 PM

    elopes with the wind... now that is engaging... it's hard to imagine a closed door...

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  14. zoya gautamJuly 6, 2008 at 3:09 AM

    Ur Opinions_A Guiding Light..Many Thanks To All Of U..

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..namastey!~

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