Saturday, June 14, 2008

transience_

day an eternal thirst
night a sea of infinity
dissolve in timeless transience!
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from many light years
of transfixed twinkling
breaks free a shooting star!
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the big bang
was an explosion
but life evolved!
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the stork is still
waiting for the fish
to become history!
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transient thoughts
stay paused
in love's eternal moment!
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is
forever
changing
[june20/08]..original/zg
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8 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonJune 15, 2008 at 2:21 AM

    The third stanza delights me! Thanks for this well-written reminder that there are no long days.
    Writing in Faith: Poems

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  2. me ann my cameraJune 15, 2008 at 2:56 AM

    The image of a twinkling star breaking free is wonderful, as are all of your other situational contrasts as well.
    nature tales and camera trails

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  3. AnonymousJune 15, 2008 at 7:49 AM

    The second and third poems are really good. Great images.

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  4. qualcosa di belloJune 16, 2008 at 6:27 AM

    i am so drawn to the shooting star that breaks free! it settles in my soul like sweet success...

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  5. PamJune 16, 2008 at 7:20 PM

    I really enjoyed the stork stanza. Nice imagery with lots of bound up energy.

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  6. Patois42June 17, 2008 at 7:25 AM

    It is your last one that speaks most to me. All of them are quite wonderful.

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  7. little wing writerJune 17, 2008 at 4:56 PM

    timeless waiting... loved em all... but the 1st one was my fav

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  8. zoya gautamJune 21, 2008 at 10:01 PM

    Obliged and Grateful To All Of U..Many Thanks..

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..namastey!~

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