Sunday, June 1, 2008

freedom

flying petals
freedom flutters and floats
butterflies blossom!
......................
the mind's not
a dark prison
but a free flowing sky!
.......................
sensitive eyes
captivate me
who wants freedom!
.......................
the statue of liberty
how it listens
to the poetry i read!
.......................
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  1. RavenJune 1, 2008 at 10:26 PM

    I especially like the 2nd - the mind's not a prison but a free-flowing sky. Wonderful. Statue of Liberty takes second place for me. They are all good.

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  2. JoyceJune 1, 2008 at 11:01 PM

    The Statue of Liberty should listen more attentively to your poetry, so that this country will become more welcoming to immigrants.

    Thank you for your poetry. My favorite is about the flying flower petals. :)

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  3. SandyCarlsonJune 2, 2008 at 2:11 AM

    Butterflies do blossom! I enjoyed the images here. God bless.

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  4. PamJune 2, 2008 at 4:18 AM

    I really like the second and last poems. I feel sorry for the Statue of Liberty who so welcomes everyone in need, only for the door to be slammed shut by people who are afraid.

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  5. AnonymousJune 2, 2008 at 9:03 AM

    Such beautiful images you have provoked. As always.

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  6. RoswilaJune 2, 2008 at 11:46 AM

    sensitive eyes
    captivate me
    who wants freedom!

    This one's really nice. :-)

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  7. Ms AfropolitanJune 2, 2008 at 2:20 PM

    I too really like the one about being captivated by sensitive eyes. It raises the question of whether freedom always is the outcome, or the desire? thanks for this

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  8. little wing writerJune 3, 2008 at 6:06 PM

    freedom expressed well.. flying petals, free flowing sky...

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  9. gautami tripathyJune 4, 2008 at 10:58 AM

    I like the first one! Great alliterations!

    voice of reason

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  10. Lisa at GreenbowJune 5, 2008 at 4:20 PM

    I really like that second haiku. Often I have to remind myself of the very fact that my mind is not a prison. Just set the mind free.

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  11. zoya gautamJune 7, 2008 at 7:32 PM

    ..with gratitude i express my Thankfulness for All Ur Comments which are indeed Helpful..

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..namastey!~

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