( the other side of _ ) ascent
climbs to her classroom
but comes down with the homework
the carousel moves
the kindergarten
elation & depression
only a seesaw ..
~ ~
the rain descends - -
& the light descends - -
but lift the spirit -
(oct 07.2009.wed)
/ original / zg
I remember this so well from when my husband was teaching. Really great verses.
ReplyDeleteCleverly done - the seesaw imagery works very well here.
ReplyDelete.. many thanks ..
ReplyDeleteI agree with these writers. Very well done. This is school for me, a teacher, and my daughter, a student.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written...I can see the school girl in my mind. Great imagery and style in this piece.
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