Sunday, September 27, 2009

color

color-blind

watch their grey hunger
it is passionate and raw
like half fed bellies

why don't you describe
the hues of other passions
an editor asks ..

/ original / zg

[ Ed - Line 3 : like empty stomachs ]
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  1. floretaSeptember 27, 2009 at 1:50 PM

    yes sometimes we have to think outside ourselves

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  2. PamSeptember 27, 2009 at 3:52 PM

    very intriguing. i love hunger being described as "grey", "passionate and raw".

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  3. SandyCarlsonSeptember 27, 2009 at 6:32 PM

    Those editors!


    Beautiful poems.

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  4. Tumblewords:September 28, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    Wise and wonderful...

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  5. spacedlawOctober 1, 2009 at 4:28 AM

    Grey is an interesting colour for hunger. Challenging thought!

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