Sunday, September 6, 2009

romance

the fights we had had
over trivialities
was only romance

the sun could be harsh
the moon shines on borrowed light
just the romance glows ..

/ original / zg

[ Edit : Lines 4 & 5 - who cares for the sun
the borrowed light of the moon ]

7 comments:

  1. I like the images this evoked...and the last line was wonderful.

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  2. Romance, a little love spat
    is good for the its health.

    The glow-meter will check its pulse
    to see if it needs more sun.

    Only way to nourish is
    through the man's stomach.
    ..

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  3. Romance is the light. Pure and wonderful.

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  4. The moon shines on borrowed light! - wonderfully said and fits perfectly with this piece!

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  5. I like the last one without a doubt, especially the line, "the moon shines on borrowed light" ... the image in my mind of the glow of romance being the light the moon borrowed is amazing -- and this line is so perfectly unique.

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..namastey!~