Saturday, January 24, 2009

if only i had time

sorrows of the world
or the world of my sorrows
only so much time
..........................
a river of life
unerupted volcanoes
time is the referee
..........................
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  1. Aki NominalJanuary 25, 2009 at 1:44 AM

    "time is the referee"

    only time tells us to stop..

    great piece! =)

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  2. Gemma WisemanJanuary 25, 2009 at 2:00 AM

    Love the alternative images of the first two lines! Powerful introduction demanding attention! And time being the referee suggests that time may monitor the rules of life but doesn't actually participate in the game!

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  3. SandyCarlsonJanuary 25, 2009 at 5:08 AM

    Time is objective. Sometimes I wonder how time will call the play when the volcano does erupt!

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  4. BarbJanuary 25, 2009 at 5:40 AM

    The first 2 lines are compelling.... the volcanoes of the one verses the many. Marvelous.

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  5. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)January 25, 2009 at 8:17 AM

    Time can be a hard referee ... glad I don't live in Washington State. You do so much with so few words, and the last one is by far my favorite.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2009 at 12:47 PM

    time heal anything.
    i , too, love the first two sentance and the point they show

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  7. floretaJanuary 25, 2009 at 11:09 PM

    i like this.. sorrows of my world or world of my sorrows.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2009 at 11:06 AM

    Yes, life does feel like this at times. We live in for the time in between volcanoes.

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  9. MaggieJanuary 26, 2009 at 12:28 PM

    Indeed...the RIVER has life in it...quite a sight to see here.

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  10. Tumblewords:January 26, 2009 at 12:33 PM

    Time as the referee opens the box of unknown. Lovely work...

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  11. Beth P.January 26, 2009 at 9:47 PM

    zg--
    I love living in the land of volcanoes here in the northwest US...precisely for the reason you so beautifully noted--the feeling of time ticking, unerupted!

    Thanks for this beautiful piece--

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  12. zoya gautamJanuary 28, 2009 at 12:23 PM

    ..i truly thank everyone of u ..

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2009 at 4:00 PM

    wow, we all live so close... well, sorta.. inland nw, just east of spokane... the referee of life... hope he knows the rules of the game... love the mirrored reflection too!

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  14. Kilauea PoetryJanuary 28, 2009 at 6:20 PM

    Ah, time the referee, this was cool.

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  15. qualcosa di belloJanuary 29, 2009 at 5:02 PM

    the idea of time as a referee is worth some deep thought...

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  16. GelJanuary 30, 2009 at 11:39 PM

    like both, but particularly the second one "time is the referee"- nice!

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..namastey!~

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