Saturday, January 17, 2009

fading memories

a war in gaza
so many innocent kids
become memories
...........................
beyond memory
your electrical impulse
running through my veins
...........................
as dusk fades away
filled with the verse of sunshine
a page of the earth
.........................
if it's amnesia
and my consciousness forgets
this being would feel you
.........................
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15 comments:

  1. JeevesJanuary 17, 2009 at 11:54 PM

    First one!!!Love it

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  2. spacedlawJanuary 18, 2009 at 12:16 AM

    Love the last one (but all are great).

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  3. SandyCarlsonJanuary 18, 2009 at 4:22 AM

    Oh, that electrical impulse that take memory beyond the words we form in our imaginations and straight into our souls.

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2009 at 5:25 AM

    Love the third, but like them all.

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  5. PamJanuary 18, 2009 at 5:55 AM

    This group shows memories from so many different points of view. The first is heartbreaking but my favorite is the last one.

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  6. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)January 18, 2009 at 6:57 AM

    Oh wow! Talking about a bird's eye view, looking through prisms. You nailed it, over and over again.

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  7. qualcosa di belloJanuary 18, 2009 at 1:54 PM

    your last one speaks to my own sense that memories are never really completely gone, but on some level we hold onto them, especially love

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  8. MaggieJanuary 18, 2009 at 2:14 PM

    "if it's amnesia
    and my consciousness forgets
    this being would feel you"


    This really speaks to my heart.

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2009 at 2:20 PM

    your words ripple through my flesh, and I want more

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  10. Sherri B.January 18, 2009 at 6:38 PM

    Oh, these were all so beautiful...the last one resonated so deeply! Our brains may forget, but our souls forever remember.

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  11. Tumblewords:January 19, 2009 at 10:24 AM

    Terrific work! They each resonate with a portion of individual memories. The third one is a novel take on the book of earth. Nice.

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  12. floretaJanuary 19, 2009 at 11:46 AM

    the first one is very powerful!

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2009 at 12:38 PM

    beautiful description of life, living and just beyond death....

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  14. Patois42January 20, 2009 at 1:39 PM

    I guess I'm not going to say anything original when I say that I truly feel that last one. Thank you.

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  15. zoya gautamJanuary 21, 2009 at 3:06 PM

    .. thankful to each one of u ..

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..namastey!~

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