Saturday, September 20, 2008

autumn

the summer is gone
autumn's not in denial
of what is to come
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play come september #
just return the old freedoms
this the world deserves
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inseparable
the leaves console the branches
look beyond winter
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for van gogh could see
the fall in a sun rising
golden perceptions!
[sep22-6.30 pm]
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/original/zg
# theme from a '60s movie
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16 comments:

  1. JulieSeptember 20, 2008 at 9:54 PM

    I like the last concept: to look beyond. I also like the idea that one season can deny what the next protents.

    "Come September" means something totally different in the Southern Hemisphere.

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  2. spacedlawSeptember 20, 2008 at 11:02 PM

    The leaves will soon let the branches to fend for themselves...

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  3. Gemma WisemanSeptember 21, 2008 at 2:21 AM

    "the leaves console the branches" is such a lovely final image!

    As per Julie's comment, "Come September" means "Come Spring" for me in Australia, so I kind of get mixed messages there!

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  4. me ann my cameraSeptember 21, 2008 at 2:59 AM

    "autumn is not in denial of what is to come"... I love the foreshadowing. Very nice.

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  5. anthonynorthSeptember 21, 2008 at 3:04 AM

    I like the sense of continuance in these.

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  6. barbs.haikuSeptember 21, 2008 at 3:29 AM

    The leaves console the branches only for as long as they can, then they must fall away, one by one. Thanks for this.

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  7. Deborah GodinSeptember 21, 2008 at 7:32 AM

    Nice play of seasons and tenses here!

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  8. RavenSeptember 21, 2008 at 9:42 AM

    I especially love your first one. Well done.

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  9. SandyCarlsonSeptember 21, 2008 at 12:40 PM

    I believe the leaves do console the branches. These are beautiful. Thanks.

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  10. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 21, 2008 at 12:55 PM

    Beautiful. Are we not lucky to witness Gods paintbrush at work?
    Well done zg.

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  11. PamSeptember 21, 2008 at 4:38 PM

    'inseparable
    the leaves console the branches
    look beyond winter'

    This is absolutely lovely. I can say no more.

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  12. Tumblewords:September 22, 2008 at 4:45 PM

    Absolutely lovely imagery!

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  13. TeriSeptember 23, 2008 at 8:05 PM

    I love the line, 'the leaves console the branches', beautiful!

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  14. qualcosa di belloSeptember 24, 2008 at 2:51 PM

    the first speaks perfectly to our autumn, which arrived on cue...all are lovely!

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  15. koujiSeptember 25, 2008 at 5:35 AM

    ah, the old freedoms. i wonder how they will play out.

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  16. zoya gautamSeptember 25, 2008 at 11:14 AM

    ..Sincere Thanks To Everyone Of U..

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..namastey!~

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