Sunday, August 10, 2008

stairways

just follow the words
through the stairways of your life
to find a poem!
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such a distant moon
whim's silvern sensuous clouds
my only stairway!
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the 'godfather' laughed
stairways to the underworld
you never ascend!
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every syllable
took me closer to a song
step by step by step!
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/original/zg

14 comments:

  1. I like the way the first and last bring the haiku full circle. And I especially like the idea of following the words to a poem. That is a beautiful image of the creative process.

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  2. 'every syllable took me closer'..this reminds me of the stairway of memory my husband and I often climb, with hints of alphabet sounds taking us halfway there, one of us finally arrives at the top with the forgotten name. All of your verses are lovely.

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  3. whim's silvern sensuous cloud... I just love how this tickles the tongue! Delicious!

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  4. The second has lovely alliteration and a sensuous feel.

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  5. oh, that first one is poetic perfection!

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  6. These are all so good, but I especially love the second one - great use of words!

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  7. the last part is especially great..."syllables promises the output of s great song" step by step....

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  8. Nice, especially liked the fourth one.

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  9. I am absolutely enchanted by the first one!

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  10. every one of yr kuz takes me someplace..

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  11. 'Stairway of my life.' Love this opening line. Now I will return and examine the rest of it more closely.

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  12. Very creative approach to the prompt in more ways than one.

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  13. ..sincerely thank All Of U for the
    guidance..

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..namastey!~