Sunday, May 11, 2008

warm

Keeps us warm
not the sun
no,nothin' like mom!//[happy mother's day!]
.....................
breathe my last
sense her touch
a death so warm!
....,................
killing desolation
i am not dead
with warm memories alive!
......................
at the tunnel's end light
me, a moth?
pulled and burnt alive!-/(added 05/15/08)
......................
mercury at sub-zero
what survives the cold
is a burning love!
......................./original/z.g.
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8 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonMay 11, 2008 at 4:16 PM

    That last one is my favorite! The persevering strength of love. God bless.
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  2. PamMay 11, 2008 at 6:12 PM

    Love the last one. The burning cold turned into burning love.

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  3. RavenMay 11, 2008 at 7:07 PM

    Vote number three for the last one. Gotta go with burning love.

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  4. TeriMay 13, 2008 at 9:14 AM

    Burning love will warm anyone!!

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  5. gautami tripathyMay 13, 2008 at 9:42 AM

    I loved the last one..

    All are great though!

    warm feelings

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  6. Pirate PrincessMay 13, 2008 at 2:09 PM

    powerful thoughts - though, I admit, my fave is the last too. Kinda funny, isn't it?

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  7. little wing writerMay 14, 2008 at 2:54 PM

    it's all about love... long after death starts to open his eyes... excellent ku...

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  8. BarbMay 15, 2008 at 5:47 PM

    The last was my favorite as well. Love conquers all!

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..namastey!~

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