Tuesday, May 6, 2008

deserted

grief v/s joy-suit(deserted)
plaintiffs, solicitors, jury
face a clues black-out!
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li'l kids' queries
answers desert me
He alone knows!
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chuckles happiness
the blues deserted
a fun feeling!.. /original/z.g.
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4 comments:

  1. "blues deserted/a fun feeling"--May it always be so!
    Writing in Faith: Poems

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  2. Nice progression from start to finish, desertion to re-finding oneself. Children's queries made me sad.

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  3. Had to laugh at the seocnd poem. Kids will ask and ask and ask. Answers DO desert us after a while.

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