Monday, May 19, 2008

bleeding

no bleeding
the wounds, a gift
the hurt drips on
[may24.08]
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the being a pen
the ink's sorrow
bleeding words a song
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such white bridal robes
bleeding mad eyes
see a lady in red
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the sea of dusk
a fiery red drop sinks
for whom the cosmos bleeds
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the heart's white roses
i send as love
are bleeding red for you!
_/(message on a bouquet of red roses)/
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parting a nightmare
yearning a dream
bleeding a reality..
[may22.08]
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this quiet bleeding
from the pain of others
in your heart a Christ! /original/z.g.
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  1. SandyCarlsonMay 19, 2008 at 6:10 PM

    Silently bleeding for the pain of others is the image of ultimate compassion. I like the juxtaposition of red and white in these.
    Writing in Faith: Poems

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  2. Gemma WisemanMay 20, 2008 at 4:23 AM

    "for whom the cosmos bleeds" - Instantly I thought of Hemingway's novel title "For Whom the Bell Tolls"! And somehow that connecting illusion works so well into your poem!

    Nice write!

    Gemma

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  3. gautami tripathyMay 20, 2008 at 5:03 AM

    All are very good. Various moods...

    ravages of time

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  4. little wing writerMay 20, 2008 at 1:20 PM

    now those are awesome... in few words the images portrayed have a range of emotions...

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  5. AndreeMay 20, 2008 at 5:12 PM

    Zoya, I am totally in love with the last poem. It is SO powerful for me, so meaningful. So much of what I have been thinking about the past few weeks.

    http://meeyauw-pad.blogspot.com/2008/05/one-single-impression-bleeding.html

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  6. BarbMay 21, 2008 at 9:23 AM

    These are wonderful, I especially love 'bleeding words a song'.



    OSI Bleeding

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  7. zoya gautamMay 24, 2008 at 6:13 PM

    ..Ur Views Guide.. Thank U All of U..

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..namastey!~

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