Monday, December 7, 2009

lighthouse

when the night would spread
like a sea without a shore
up there , a lighthouse

answering the dark
the meanings they burn so bright
shining , a lighthouse ..

/ original / zg

[ Ed : - Line 3 - the lighthouse shining
- Line 6 - a lighthouse shining ]

6 comments:

  1. One must be very bold to answer the dark.

    So well done. Thanks.

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  2. These are both wonderful. The first two lines of the first carry an unforgettable image. The next one is beautifully done.

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  3. How wonderful to see that light in the darkness.

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  4. The light always guides...these were beautiful.

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  5. I like "the night spreading like the sea...". Nice images.

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..namastey!~