Monday, December 7, 2009

lighthouse

when the night would spread
like a sea without a shore
up there , a lighthouse

answering the dark
the meanings they burn so bright
shining , a lighthouse ..

/ original / zg

[ Ed : - Line 3 - the lighthouse shining
- Line 6 - a lighthouse shining ]
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  1. SandyCarlsonDecember 7, 2009 at 5:52 PM

    One must be very bold to answer the dark.

    So well done. Thanks.

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  2. Tumblewords:December 7, 2009 at 5:53 PM

    These are both wonderful. The first two lines of the first carry an unforgettable image. The next one is beautifully done.

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  3. MaggieDecember 8, 2009 at 10:10 AM

    How wonderful to see that light in the darkness.

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  4. zoya gautamDecember 8, 2009 at 10:35 AM

    many thanks ..

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  5. Sherri B.December 8, 2009 at 1:53 PM

    The light always guides...these were beautiful.

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  6. Carlos GesmundoDecember 9, 2009 at 5:59 PM

    I like "the night spreading like the sea...". Nice images.

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..namastey!~

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