First haiku: 4 generation goes, and a generation comes, but the earth remains forever. 5) The sun rises, and the sun goes down, and hastens to the place where it rises. 6 The wind blows to the south and goes around to the north; around and around goes the wind, and on its circuits the wind returns. 7 All streams run to the sea, but the sea is not full; to the place where the streams flow, there they flow again. Ecclesiastes 1:4-7 (especially verse seven)
Second haiku Your other posted poem in a nutshell.
First haiku:
ReplyDelete4 generation goes, and a generation comes,
but the earth remains forever.
5) The sun rises, and the sun goes down,
and hastens to the place where it rises.
6 The wind blows to the south
and goes around to the north;
around and around goes the wind,
and on its circuits the wind returns.
7 All streams run to the sea,
but the sea is not full;
to the place where the streams flow,
there they flow again.
Ecclesiastes 1:4-7 (especially verse seven)
Second haiku
Your other posted poem in a nutshell.
Loved them all, Jim
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the eternal cycle renewing itself. what else could it be? lovely.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. LOVE the first one. Second one is dead on!
ReplyDeletemany thanks ..
ReplyDeleteI love the phrase - forget the jargon - which is a perfect start for the lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteAll I can say is exactly as I drown myself in these thoughts.
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