Sunday, July 26, 2009

fragrance

the boy knows his dog
the wag of the tell tale tail
mom's cooking downstairs

his first cigarette
shouldn't a deodorant hide it
but it's a mom's nose ..


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  1. SandyCarlsonJuly 26, 2009 at 4:51 PM

    How we underestimate the power of fragrance!

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  2. JimJuly 26, 2009 at 9:13 PM

    You did good, Zoya. Mom's nose knows (I like your tell tale tail telling) but mine found my lighter for hard evidence.
    ..

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  3. zoya gautamJuly 27, 2009 at 1:25 PM

    hard evidence is a wonderful thing jim ,

    in law it begins with charges,leading up to a
    a reasonable opportunity of defence , substantiation or otherwise of the charges ,
    hopefully a fair trial , and even more hopefully a fair verdict

    i am happy ur lighter was found and deemed to be hard evidence

    jurisprudence begins with moms and at home ..

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  4. Bobbie SandlinJuly 27, 2009 at 5:04 PM

    A fun and sweet read!! Great take on the prompt!

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  5. Tumblewords:July 27, 2009 at 8:36 PM

    These are great!

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  6. Tammie LeeJuly 28, 2009 at 9:59 AM

    you have me chuckling with this one
    that scent is not one that can be hidden!

    Spirithelpers

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  7. MaggieJuly 30, 2009 at 2:57 PM

    I never knew how my mama could tell if we tried to sneak a smoke when we were children until I became an adult and stopped smoking.

    AS a child we never wondered why we recognized the smell of our dog.

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  8. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)July 30, 2009 at 6:24 PM

    Ha! I love your "tell tale tail" too! And yes, mothers can smell things other can't ... no matter how one tries to mask it. Very good indeed!

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