Saturday, February 21, 2009

twilight

golden suffusion
filled with the birds' harmonies
but that was morning

the day had to end
for that's when the cows come home
nothing like twilight ..

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11 comments:

  1. Jacqueline DoveFebruary 21, 2009 at 11:22 PM

    Hi, thanks this gave me a fat grin - at a time when my mirth is rather thin on the ground.

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  2. Gemma WisemanFebruary 22, 2009 at 12:42 AM

    Love the double entendre of the 2nd last line! Definitely smiley stuff!

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  3. spacedlawFebruary 22, 2009 at 2:10 AM

    I like the certainty, the definite power of twilight.

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  4. SandyCarlsonFebruary 22, 2009 at 3:01 AM

    Nothing like coming home!

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  5. qualcosa di belloFebruary 22, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    i like the cyclical feel of rightness here.

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  6. SavannahFebruary 22, 2009 at 8:07 AM

    I just want to laugh because my cows never left home ...

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  7. PamFebruary 22, 2009 at 3:13 PM

    I remember my mother giving me a hard time for staying out long after the 'cows came home'. We never had cows so it was rather confusing.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2009 at 4:33 PM

    I like the inevitably of day's ending thanks to the weighty homeward bearing swing of the cows.

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  9. Tumblewords:February 23, 2009 at 12:27 PM

    A day of life - wonderful! Love it!

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  10. PattiFebruary 24, 2009 at 3:31 PM

    I like the hopefulness of the morning...beautifully written~

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  11. zoya gautamFebruary 25, 2009 at 3:53 PM

    .. many thanks to all of u ..

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..namastey!~

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