Saturday, February 7, 2009

movement

standing still the tree
shades a tired traveler
moves into his heart

the liquefied soul
and its' journey to the eyes
is sometimes called love ..
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~words
   transfixed
       on a journey ~

        ~immobile
             words
                 voyage on~

[feb10/11.2009]

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12 comments:

  1. RoswilaFebruary 7, 2009 at 11:00 PM

    That first one is quite a lovely take on the prompt. Thanks.

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  2. BarbFebruary 8, 2009 at 4:29 AM

    Oooh, I love the first one as I am grateful for trees every day.

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  3. SandyCarlsonFebruary 8, 2009 at 5:25 AM

    That is a perfect definition of love!

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  4. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)February 8, 2009 at 10:00 AM

    "the liquefied soul"

    How unique. I love them both, but the last one made me blink in recognition. Love, how sweet it is.

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  5. Sherri B.February 8, 2009 at 11:16 AM

    Oh wow, these are both beautifully done. Can't pick a favorite because each one is so uniquely different but awesome!

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  6. Bruce MillerFebruary 8, 2009 at 3:20 PM

    i so clearly see basho in his bamboo raincoat in these of yours

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  7. floretaFebruary 8, 2009 at 5:04 PM

    a great journey! very beautiful wordscrafting.

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  8. JimFebruary 8, 2009 at 7:15 PM

    The way to a person's (man's for sure) heart is ...
    Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.
    ..

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2009 at 7:17 AM

    the power of a tree...beautiful

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  10. Tumblewords:February 9, 2009 at 10:43 AM

    Both of these are lovely moving moments!

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  11. indicaspeciesFebruary 10, 2009 at 4:58 AM

    Loved both your Haiku, and the movement truly moved me.

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  12. zoya gautamFebruary 10, 2009 at 3:50 PM

    ..many thanks to all of u..

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..namastey!~

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