Saturday, October 11, 2008

gold

without a worry
flaunt this unguarded treasure
let marigolds sway
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one broken lantern
happily a flame flickers
this warmth is golden
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bare realities
autumnal recitations
diffused goldenness
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14 comments:

  1. koujiOctober 11, 2008 at 12:09 PM

    fascinating imagery. :O

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  2. spacedlawOctober 11, 2008 at 10:03 PM

    I love the first one.

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  3. Gemma WisemanOctober 12, 2008 at 12:12 AM

    Love your tiers of gold! Delightful!

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  4. anthonynorthOctober 12, 2008 at 1:33 AM

    I like the first one best, too. But they're all excellent.

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  5. MandyOctober 12, 2008 at 2:59 AM

    Very nicely stated.

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  6. SandyCarlsonOctober 12, 2008 at 3:08 AM

    Bring on the diffused gold of the season! Thanks.

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  7. barbs.haikuOctober 12, 2008 at 4:36 AM

    Love the first one, too. 'let marigolds sway' Brilliant!

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  8. qualcosa di belloOctober 12, 2008 at 4:51 AM

    like many of the commenters i am drawn to the imagery of the first

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  9. MyBellaviaOctober 12, 2008 at 6:35 AM

    Beautiful sights of gold! I too love the first. "unguarded treasure", so true!

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  10. Deborah GodinOctober 12, 2008 at 8:56 AM

    More little gems - you are on a roll!! These are lovely.

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  11. AnonymousOctober 12, 2008 at 10:22 AM

    Each one is so beautiful. Love them all.

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  12. Tumblewords:October 13, 2008 at 10:55 AM

    Nice selection - they are all 'gold'...

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  13. PamOctober 16, 2008 at 4:43 AM

    Lovely haiku poems. My favorite is the second because I love the idea of a broken object bringing warmth and happiness.

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  14. zoya gautamOctober 16, 2008 at 6:29 PM

    ..Truly Thankful To All Of U..

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..namastey!~

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