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Saturday, October 18, 2008
never ending
ending abruptly wish it remained forever illogical dream ................. indestructible glowing through the milki way ethereal love ....................... /original/zg
This reminds me of how fascinated I am by the illogical. I wonder if it's a desire to make it logical or to travel along with something that is not. I suppose the illogical challenges my notion of the importance of logic!
Dear zg--
ReplyDeleteI love this one too.
So appreciate your subtlety here on your blogs...and in the comments you make on others' posts.
Thank you!
I've often had dreams that I wished had lasted much longer...
ReplyDeleteand many times too, they lasted too long by half!
Lovely as well (I do prefer the other offering though).
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of how fascinated I am by the illogical. I wonder if it's a desire to make it logical or to travel along with something that is not. I suppose the illogical challenges my notion of the importance of logic!
ReplyDeleteTwo more gems! I really like what you've done with this prompt.
ReplyDeleteBut doesn't the dream make perfect sense at the time?
ReplyDeleteI really like both of these.
Such an interesting perspective on never ending.
ReplyDeleteI love the second stanza! indestructible love - if you truly love, can you ever un-love?
ReplyDeleteI really like the first haiku. . . I have had those dreams and found myself not wanting to wake from the puzzle.
ReplyDeleteoh how i can feel that sense of wishing a dream could continue...
ReplyDeleteBoth are lovely, and I feel them both.
ReplyDelete.Sincere Thanks To All Of U..
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