Monday, November 9, 2009

departed

to feel what you feel
i departed from myself
to feel what i feel

hurts just overstay
in the li'l box i live in
i am a good host ..

they understood pain
and love was all they wanted
the story remained ../ ( November 14, 2009 )


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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 9, 2009 at 12:36 PM

    Isn't that just the truth? I am working hard to keep them outside my door.

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  2. zoya gautamNovember 9, 2009 at 12:57 PM

    fourwindshaiga ,

    i tried too,

    _ but my heart won't listen ..

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  3. AmityNovember 9, 2009 at 5:28 PM

    that's just as difficult...:)

    but very nice one...:)

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  4. The Write GirlNovember 9, 2009 at 6:41 PM

    We all can relate to these sentiments...lovely take on this OSI prompt.

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  5. Tumblewords:November 9, 2009 at 8:20 PM

    These are strong haiku. Powerfully provocative.

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  6. zoya gautamNovember 10, 2009 at 10:36 AM

    .. many thanks ..

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  7. Quiet PathsNovember 10, 2009 at 1:51 PM

    Excellent insights.

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  8. SandyCarlsonNovember 11, 2009 at 4:21 PM

    I have been a host to such guests, too. The first one is perfect.

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  9. JukotaNovember 11, 2009 at 5:13 PM

    love the second one. "a good host!" yeah... that's it. Most of us are good hosts!

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..namastey!~

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