Sunday, April 12, 2009

live water

' water '

i know the oppressed
live water flows through their veins
it's red in color
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this golden water
when it really comes to life
it makes life different

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9 comments:

  1. Sherri B.April 12, 2009 at 5:28 AM

    Beautifully done...

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  2. sgreerpittApril 12, 2009 at 8:33 AM

    two very interesting haiku; I especially like the use of color in these verses.

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  3. qualcosa di belloApril 12, 2009 at 5:31 PM

    your words pulse with life ready to break through a barrier

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  4. gabrielleApril 12, 2009 at 10:52 PM

    the red of life taken
    the gold of its return
    beautiful

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  5. Quiet PathsApril 13, 2009 at 9:29 AM

    These are both really rich in thought...

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  6. Tumblewords:April 13, 2009 at 10:11 AM

    Colorful and concise - these spell the life of water. Nice!

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  7. AnonymousApril 13, 2009 at 5:57 PM

    yes, what they all sed!!!

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  8. zoya gautamApril 14, 2009 at 1:00 PM

    ..many thanks everyone ..

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  9. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)April 18, 2009 at 12:14 PM

    ... without which there would be no human life as we know it.

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..namastey!~

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