Sunday, December 28, 2008

stardust

barefooted the moon
walks on a solitude of sand
with hints of stardust

'tis stardust on earth
the yellow pollen travels
till wild flowers bloom..

/original/zg

9 comments:

  1. My goodness, I am thrilled with this imagery. I will think of it next time I am able to walk barefoot around here!

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  2. Dear zg--
    I really felt this one--what flowers will bloom from that stardust!
    Thank you, as ever--
    happiest of new years to you--

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  3. the image of pollen as stardust is enchanting.

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  4. Such a lovely poem. I love the images it brings into my mind. Beautifully done.

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  5. Great job! Love the imagery and 'next' thought that's written here.

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  6. Hints of stardust on the sand. I love this imagery. I remember now the little glitters in the sand when I walk on it, but never thought of stardust until your words. Thank you!

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  7. You caught me with the first line "barefooted the moon". Very nicely done.

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  8. ..deeply thankful to everyone of u-
    best wishes for a very happy new year!..

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..namastey!~